|Reviews for tenderness|
| ThisCut-UpAngel chapter 1 . 5/17/2006
So chaotic, but I must say that I love it. I hope you continue to writing.
| greyskyeyes chapter 1 . 4/10/2006
whoa-ho. very crazy, very you. love the new penname btw. good stuff, man.
| St. Mock the Turtle chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
I like it. It reminds me a little of stuff by e.e. cumings.
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 3/23/2006
The rush of this is marvelous. It gets into the readers head and continues from there. It really has a slick jumping through the movement feel to it. Like accelerated snapshots. Well done.
| run rabbit run chapter 1 . 3/21/2006
ifn it isn't exactly how most relationships seem to be and the style and format drives that point like a spike through the heart. very awesome!cheers!-rabbit