Reviews for My worst sin
frugale chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
You did a wonderful job writing this, we feel such, such strong attachment to the adressee of the poem, that for some time I was struggling with the interpretation - is it a lover? a brother? a soulmate? before I established it was a father (and God, I hope I'm not wrong!).

I really need to point out the fact that theif surely was intended to appear as thief...?
Anna Christie chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
"beneath the weeping August sun,

two days before my eighteenth with the air

so scalding thick,

i couldn't breathe,"

Amazing. (Those were my favorite lines.) But this whole thing is just stunning and so, so heartfelt I feel like I'm a part of it when I read. I have a question as to what it's really about? If you would tell me, that'd be great, if not, that's fine too. :) Because, either way, this poem is quite amazing.
Fire of the Vampire chapter 1 . 5/27/2002
Very good. I like it. Wow. Keep up the good work!

God Bless

Much Love

Later Daze

- Kacie
silversilence chapter 1 . 2/24/2001
that was really strangely formatted for a poem, but it was interesting and I liked it
The Confuser chapter 2 . 2/24/2001
Bravo. Need I say more? Tiern'Mes'Camnet and Reis'Dem'Naca. Oh, and Bravo. _~
sos chapter 2 . 2/24/2001
sad, depressimg, greif stricken (oooh big words) baiscally brilliant poem! nice one keep it up.