Reviews for Juniper
Moosher chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
Great writing. I loved it. The word choice, the rhythm , the depth, the powerful emotion protrayed, the sadness mixed with anger.. all amazing. One thing I really didn't like was the caps. I found that they disturb the poem. Your writing did a fantastic job in giving away your feeling, I don't think they were needed at all. Just an opinion though, feel free to either take it into consideration or merely ignore it. Keep writing!

KristyASoroka chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
The words themselves are beautifully put together. However your use of a bit irritating on the eyes.( Also I know of several people who wont read work with caps, i dont see why) However if you use italics, it will still add the strength to those words. Either way, this is a nice work.

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crazy dog events chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
I understand why you used the caps, but they're still sort of grating. I think it's better-read without them, actually. NIce job, anyways.
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
Wow! Speechless actually! Great job! Keep at it!