Reviews for Carnal
mylittlechangingtruths chapter 1 . 5/27/2006
hmm.. i likey. your descriptions are awesome; you capture the emotion, not just the... well.. sex. thanks for your review of The Colors Underneath!
White is a Sin chapter 1 . 5/27/2006
ah i like this...weird that you wrote about that...but good description and stuff. Thnx for the review _ Much appreciated. I agree with that other girl GRAMMER IS THE KEY! (not shouting) though that's why i don't use full stops and commas very often...*.*
sundaynightsky chapter 1 . 5/25/2006
thanks for your comment, it is interesting to read and i will take on board what you said. this piece is worded well, but needs punctuation to help the flow a .
run rabbit run chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
woah! that was intense. -rabbit