Reviews for She dances |
---|
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi. Very emotional, I really like it. Wow. I really hope this isn't autobio, because that's really not a fun way to be. And if it is, I'm really sorry, but just keep dancing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sad, but nicely done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like the repetition of "and she dances". Overall, its a rather depressing poem, but I still like it. Well done! And thanks for your lovely reviews! ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() As already said, you used one poetic device well which was the repeition. But sometimes the rythym seemed a bit off. But nice job, anyway. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love-love your writing style. Good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the repetition of "how she dances", but the general theme of the poem was somewhat cliche. |