Reviews for She dances
alamodie chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
Hi. Very emotional, I really like it. Wow. I really hope this isn't autobio, because that's really not a fun way to be. And if it is, I'm really sorry, but just keep dancing.
Mistress Elena chapter 1 . 12/19/2007
Sad, but nicely done.
Elphie Thropp chapter 1 . 10/3/2007
I really like the repetition of "and she dances".

Overall, its a rather depressing poem, but I still like it. Well done!

And thanks for your lovely reviews! )
Silent Will chapter 1 . 4/18/2007
As already said, you used one poetic device well which was the repeition. But sometimes the rythym seemed a bit off. But nice job, anyway.
CHIIJOY chapter 1 . 2/15/2007
I love-love your writing style. Good job.
Lovetress chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
I liked the repetition of "how she dances", but the general theme of the poem was somewhat cliche.