Reviews for Hollow
Sweetly Sarcastic chapter 1 . 3/28/2006
it's got great descriptions, but honestly, you could do much better than just a short poem- this could easily be a longerr poem that explains exactly why that sorrow is there, and if the narrator somehow caused it indirectly or directly.

it's still good- short and sweet
crazy dog events chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
Gorgeous. Short and sweet.
eighteen hundred chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
This is cool. I don't usually like metered stuff, I guess is what you'd call this...? Yeah. But this is good, I like it.