Reviews for dream
til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton chapter 1 . 4/3/2006
i like the your word choice (shattered, vivid, star dust).

midnight skies are scarlet red chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
Similiar theme to some other things Ive seen from you, but I love it. Especially the first line.
White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 3/24/2006
ah, so pretty but so sort of's gorgeously written, fabulous job.
dark stars grace chapter 1 . 3/24/2006
absolutely gorgeous. enchantingly beautiful, keep writing.
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 3/23/2006
wow vivid. i think this perfectly describes a dream nice work.
MidnightStar005 chapter 1 . 3/23/2006
I love the line of, "star dust in your eyes." Wow is all I have to say!

Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
Vivid. Mystical and wonderfully visual. Great haiku.
chaos called creation chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
pretty pretty.

Vyvyan chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
hmm...interesting. I like it.
Aquafied chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
what a light that would be, star dust?

i think it would be almost a plasma that rips away at you

but it is a metaphor, like us all