|Reviews for French Kisses|
| Fobbster chapter 2 . 7/18/2015
So much uke it's like swimming in fucking syrup.
| endlessangels chapter 5 . 9/15/2014
It makes my head hurt when I see the French language used improperly. Please correct this. What you have typed literally translates to "It's you problem not." I'm going to assume you meant "It's not your problem." The correct way of saying this is "Ce n'est pas ton problème."
Also, it's spelt "appelle" with a double L, not a single L.
Other than your horrible French grammar, your story is very cutesy, mostly fluff, and a lot of angst. Not usually my style, but I still like it.
| iamhispacifier chapter 14 . 5/26/2013
hell no! How could you abandon this story?! Oh myyyyy I felt it's just like such a waste I read this from the start and when I see the latest chapter, you disappoint me with this announcement! You didn't finished this story for 6 years! So bad! X
| Vinnian Hill chapter 6 . 5/12/2012
MARCH NINETH IS MY BIRTHDAY TOO! :)
| anon chapter 9 . 4/19/2010
Is there something missing here? I know you were in the middle of a re-write, but could you at least say what happened? Or am I just missing something? I don't think so, but it's possible. I've read a little farther and I thought maybe Wraith fainted on stage, but then I thought it sounded like something more. I'm just really confused, but I've liked your story up until now. I still like it I think, but yeah...
| PointlessStoriesAreMyThing chapter 11 . 12/25/2009
I'm really tired. Must sleep. Hmm, sleep sounds nice...
NO! Must finish story!...See what you're doing to me? Ugh...
| PointlessStoriesAreMyThing chapter 8 . 12/25/2009
He flipping CUTS HIMSELF? No. Nonononono. NOt cool. So not cool. Ugh, this boy has issues...
Must. Keep. Reading...
| Inconspicuous Stranger chapter 14 . 10/18/2009
Update or I will be forced to inflict bodily harm. )
| ZOMGamber chapter 2 . 8/28/2009
You know this story reminds me of anime
I can just imagine wraith and philippe as cartoon characters with big eyes and crazy hair, speaking Japanese.
| Deciding chapter 9 . 8/18/2009
hm I am confuzzled O.O I loved it up to here but it seems to have skipped.. i read on to ch 11 and then Flavius arrives and I swear they had already met O_o .. aah well :P
| Poptart Guava King chapter 14 . 1/26/2009
:( no more updates? pity
it was a fab story ...
| JJL chapter 9 . 1/22/2009
I did not really get this ch. It was a big jump from the last
| Amaya Mina Hikari chapter 13 . 1/21/2009
*pokes author repeatedly with a stick* Do you by any chance happen to still be in the realm of the living?
I started reading this story ages ago and then forgot and now found it again. You haven't updated in almost a year! O_O I hope you haven't died or anything This is such a great story and it would be awesome if you'd finish it.
If you're re-writing this, you should post whatever you have, if you have anything. It would be a real shame to see this story die off, it's interesting and it has some really brilliatn ideas. The only thing that I can see that needs a bit of fixing would be not jumping POV's in the chapters or at the beginning of chapters without warning. Like... state when a chapter will be narrated from a different POV, otherwsie it's a little confusing trying to figure out who's speaking unless it's either Phillipe or Wraith. And maybe slowing down the pace of some of the chapters. Other then that, it's great and there's hardly, if any spelling/grammar/punctuation mistakes.
I hope that you'll consider continuing with this story, it's very cute, yet serious at the same time and your last chapter included a really big cliffhanger and I have to know what happens.
So, I really hope that you'll consider updating this story again, or maybe even posting a basic outline of what happens. So, you have my best wishes and hope that you'll post something.
| RaVeN-naILs chapter 14 . 7/2/2008
gah! that was may! its july! and i want a new chapter damn it! sorry, i just want to get my point across. please update!
| kirarin242 chapter 8 . 3/16/2008