|Reviews for Thrift store|
| Halcyon Impulsion chapter 1 . 7/4/2006
Ha! I've been here! I've done that! Just last week in fact... favorite?-
Tin cups and floral pennies,
I was flooded into submission, hands careening carefully;-it just rolls along incredibly.
| forsakensmile chapter 1 . 3/23/2006
Colourful and striking. Rather disorientating effect, which I do like.
| ronshaberry chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
Awesome, I love the clash of all the adjectives, it really seems to make me see the clutteredness (is that a word? It is now) of the shop. Lovely. Awesome. Cool. Great.
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
Wonderful end line. This really creates feeling with the motion. Thrift store feeling. Searching through the discards to find a few things that fit wherever. I realize that this is deeper than that, so you've done well with the double meaning. Well written. Well detailed. Excellent write.
| Aquafied chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
my imagination flew 10 yards, only to spark dead.-clever and biting.
ah, the end. so great.
its real, is it?