|Reviews for Sunday, March 19, 2006|
| write25 chapter 1 . 4/19/2006
beautiful. i find no other words to describe it, yet somehow 'beautiful' seems to sell it short. mariah
| Annie Jadin chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
I think this is beautiful! Just one small grammatical nit: "laying" should probably by "lying." Love "The sweet / bliss / of her / groggily / spoken words." I think you captured the feeling of such a moment wonderfully.