Reviews for P I E C E S
Twisted Something chapter 1 . 1/30/2009
I love this poem, it does remind me of the times I've ripped up work and attempted to put it back together.
fading innocence chapter 1 . 9/27/2006
Hehe, you're just like me, always rhyming at first but then gradually descending into free-verse...haha.

I love the last two lines.

Fading Innocence

'dazzle me with your hypocrisy'
LyrreM chapter 1 . 4/19/2006
are you mad? dont ever rip your works of art! give em to me! tsk tsk... so like frillion.

YOU'RE MY HERO its one of the best poems yet. so simple yet so... magical! (no words to describe it) haha am i too dramatic. I absolutely Loved it. I envy you.

anyway,sorry it took me a while. im still reading frozen heart at the moment. its a bit long. i've missed quite a lot, havent i?

p.s. dont you forget me when you're famous. luv ya horny penguin!
Plinky chapter 1 . 3/23/2006
Wow, I love this! And I so know about the quickedit thing - so true. I hate it. *Grumbles*

It's a beautiful poem, really really lovely. So simple, so few words, and yet so lovely.

The last two lines are magical.

Keep writing!