Reviews for P I E C E S
Twisted Something chapter 1 . 1/30/2009
I love this poem, it does remind me of the times I've ripped up work and attempted to put it back together.
fading innocence chapter 1 . 9/27/2006
Hehe, you're just like me, always rhyming at first but then gradually descending into free-verse...haha.

I love the last two lines.

~Fading Innocence

'dazzle me with your hypocrisy'
LyrreM chapter 1 . 4/19/2006
are you mad? dont ever rip your works of art! give em to me! tsk tsk... so like frillion.

YOU'RE MY HERO~ its one of the best poems yet. so simple yet so... magical! (no words to describe it) haha am i too dramatic. I absolutely Loved it. I envy you.

anyway,sorry it took me a while. im still reading frozen heart at the moment. its a bit long. i've missed quite a lot, havent i?

p.s. dont you forget me when you're famous. luv ya horny penguin!
Plinky chapter 1 . 3/23/2006
Wow, I love this! And I so know about the quickedit thing - so true. I hate it. *Grumbles*

It's a beautiful poem, really really lovely. So simple, so few words, and yet so lovely.

The last two lines are magical.

Keep writing!