Reviews for The Void
helium lost chapter 1 . 4/3/2006
Great, unique idea; I never really thought very much about this before. :) You might be able to add more of an impact to the last paragraph by adding a small separation from the rest of the text to show how it breaks off from the narration of the brain. Well-written, though the structure is a bit repetitive in the beginning. Kudos on a good job :)

- hl
DontLookDown chapter 1 . 3/23/2006
wait, She was in an accident and she woke up Outside of her body? In a jar? as a brain? very weird..