Reviews for Perhaps, perhaps, Contemplation
theverysadclown chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
I love .It tells a story with questions and possiblities
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 4/23/2006
Very lyrically song-like and potent in subtlety. I really like the title. Fits well the tone of the work and the feeling elicited. Well done.
Charity F chapter 1 . 4/15/2006
Very nice...the rhyming's a little jumpy at places, but over all a very nice piece of work... I love it!

Tabitha
HgBookworm chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
I like this poem for its honesty. Love is a very confusing emotion and this poem portrays it with ease. Good luck with your writing in the future.-HgBookworm
Pedestria chapter 1 . 4/13/2006
wow truely amazing. it seems very personal and i feel intense emotion coming from it. great job!
dancingintherain chapter 1 . 4/10/2006
aww this is so bittersweet...but i really liked how you showed your forwardness with your love by even taking risks in your stanzas by adding that 'perhaps'...lovely poem and thank you for your wonderful reviews!
Twilit Exaggerance chapter 1 . 4/8/2006
I enjoyed this. Not quite short, more bitter than sweet. But it was a good poem.

Well wrote. Especially the ending.
mercury.love chapter 1 . 4/6/2006
I really love the first four lines of this. It all sounds so hopeful and undecided and doubtful at the same time and that's how I feel right now.

School IS a poetic leech. I hate it. I never have time or ideas.

But, I still think this is a good poem.
Les Yeux Minuit chapter 1 . 4/6/2006
I really enjoyed this poem, I could feel the emotion pouring out of it. Also it flows wonderfully, I really really love it
Krystal Watters chapter 1 . 4/5/2006
school might be leeching away at ur muse, but this is still another wonderfull piece. It flows well and i like its mood
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
I like this a lot... it fits the title perfectly... very uncertain and thoughtful, which is how we all are about a lot of things... great piece
plummet chapter 1 . 4/3/2006
Hah, I know whatcha mean about school. Makes you exhausted...Anyway, loved this, loved the truth of it. Great job.
UndiscoveredOtherkin chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
I love it. It's a great poem. You did well.
Arichos chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
Lovely. Beautiful
toxic-noodle725 chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
o! i luvd it! it was really good. especially the descriptions.i hope it doesnt become a painful memory. lol! keep it up!
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