|Reviews for Perhaps, perhaps, Contemplation|
| theverysadclown chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
I love .It tells a story with questions and possiblities
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 4/23/2006
Very lyrically song-like and potent in subtlety. I really like the title. Fits well the tone of the work and the feeling elicited. Well done.
| Charity F chapter 1 . 4/15/2006
Very nice...the rhyming's a little jumpy at places, but over all a very nice piece of work... I love it!
| HgBookworm chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
I like this poem for its honesty. Love is a very confusing emotion and this poem portrays it with ease. Good luck with your writing in the future.-HgBookworm
| Pedestria chapter 1 . 4/13/2006
wow truely amazing. it seems very personal and i feel intense emotion coming from it. great job!
| dancingintherain chapter 1 . 4/10/2006
aww this is so bittersweet...but i really liked how you showed your forwardness with your love by even taking risks in your stanzas by adding that 'perhaps'...lovely poem and thank you for your wonderful reviews!
| Twilit Exaggerance chapter 1 . 4/8/2006
I enjoyed this. Not quite short, more bitter than sweet. But it was a good poem.
Well wrote. Especially the ending.
| mercury.love chapter 1 . 4/6/2006
I really love the first four lines of this. It all sounds so hopeful and undecided and doubtful at the same time and that's how I feel right now.
School IS a poetic leech. I hate it. I never have time or ideas.
But, I still think this is a good poem.
| Les Yeux Minuit chapter 1 . 4/6/2006
I really enjoyed this poem, I could feel the emotion pouring out of it. Also it flows wonderfully, I really really love it
| Krystal Watters chapter 1 . 4/5/2006
school might be leeching away at ur muse, but this is still another wonderfull piece. It flows well and i like its mood
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
I like this a lot... it fits the title perfectly... very uncertain and thoughtful, which is how we all are about a lot of things... great piece
| plummet chapter 1 . 4/3/2006
Hah, I know whatcha mean about school. Makes you exhausted...Anyway, loved this, loved the truth of it. Great job.
| UndiscoveredOtherkin chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
I love it. It's a great poem. You did well.
| Arichos chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
| toxic-noodle725 chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
o! i luvd it! it was really good. especially the descriptions.i hope it doesnt become a painful memory. lol! keep it up!