Reviews for Tinkerbell is Dead
half-sketched.staccatos chapter 1 . 7/19/2007
konban wa

"A six-year-old's first murder."

"She's ripping out her pigtails"

"The greatest sorrow/Is the sorrow/Of childhood's end."

My three favorite lines (7 lines actually, but who's honestly counting?). I thought they were so beautiful and so heartbreaking and so *true*. The worst thing in the world is when a child grows up. There's a quote I once read: "You know a child is growing up when he starts asking questions that have answers." I think those are the exact words. Anyway, this poem reminded me of that. I loved this. It was so anguished.

Gute nacht, tomodachi

-Shan-
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 3/24/2006
Wow. The shortness of this is very powerful! Excellent poem. Write on!

Anna
nofaceme chapter 1 . 3/24/2006
so sad...the lines about pigtales and such are so vivid. Especially the last three. Great work.
Colonel Augen chapter 1 . 3/24/2006
Oh very sad. I liked it.
Peace Blossoms chapter 1 . 3/24/2006
Wow...
chocohound chapter 1 . 3/24/2006
Good job, very original. I loved the line "A six-year-old's first murder" It really sums up the tragedy that is not believing in magic anymore