| Reviews for inclined |
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   punctured.lungs chapter 1 . 6/21/2011 I was intrigued enough to read this about six times, haha. I don't know why, but I absolutely adore it. ~a. |
| G.L.A.M.O.R.O.U.S.P.U.N.K chapter 1 . 11/27/2006 WOW I hope I can be 1/2 as good as you this poem left me spechless |
| Leeona Trance chapter 1 . 10/3/2006 It seems so dark and seductive. I love the repitition of the "idare you:" Amazing; captivating. I must read more. ~LT |
| All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 9/14/2006 So full of emotion, I love it. Great for reviewing my stuff D~Rowan~ |
| i.am.the.winter chapter 1 . 9/13/2006 i have very little clue as to what it's about, but the good side to that is that i don't care! haha. good work. especially like the "idare you" lines. good work. and thanks for the reviews. - devil in a midnight mass |
| luv me like no other chapter 1 . 7/19/2006 Amazing piece you have here. A bit disjointed for me, but maybe I'm just missing sumthing. I loved reading this and I especially loved the last line. |
| 364 unbirthdays chapter 1 . 6/12/2006 I love this. I really do. Its somewhat 'mysterioius' in an good way, though. I really like how it is so bold and outstanding. I enjoyed this a lot! |
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 6/11/2006 interesting imagery. for some odd reason, i feel like i'm missing something out of this - like references or something. nice work. |
| Wicked Witch Krandomity chapter 1 . 6/11/2006 Dark and hectic. Slightly confusing, but I quite liked it. I especially liked how you used "I dare you:..." to help create the mood. Lovely job. Happy Writing-W. |
| angel953 chapter 1 . 6/10/2006 interesting though it was a different writing style that i have never seen but it's really the way thanks for the review for my poem Springtime and no unortunately i did not win they said it was to long which made it boring oh well win some lose some |
| goddessofmoondreams chapter 1 . 6/8/2006 Interesting. You have a very unique writing style. I really liked this poem, very powerful. Keep writing. |
| who-im-bleeding-for chapter 1 . 6/7/2006 this is freaking awesome. t has a lot of emotion in so little words. I love it. And when I'm talking about wether his hair was brown or black, he said his hair was black and i said it was brown. we had a small but fun debate about it. |
| skylines chapter 1 . 6/6/2006 You made me sign in! :O Wow, very forceful poem. I love it. I like it so much that I'm going to add it to my favourites. I especially like the last few lines. About the coffin having to fit somebody. It really makes you want to think. Thanks so much for your review, I didn't really notice all the little errors, and people like you pointing them out helps out quite a bit. Thanks again! |
| burning in effigy chapter 1 . 6/5/2006 Wow... angry poem; like how you have the "I dare you:..." lines, brings everything together and kind of like a morbid playfulness (if that makes any sense) Last line was my favorite; made me smile, and I went back to the beginning to read it all over again. Excellent job! |
| A Midsummer Nights Sacrifice chapter 1 . 6/5/2006 Wow, just wow amazing lots of emotion so unique. I've never read anything like this, this is awesome... ~Moi~ |