Reviews for inclined
punctured.lungs chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
I was intrigued enough to read this about six times, haha. I don't know why, but I absolutely adore it.

G.L.A.M.O.R.O.U.S.P.U.N.K chapter 1 . 11/27/2006
WOW I hope I can be 1/2 as good as you this poem left me spechless
Leeona Trance chapter 1 . 10/3/2006
It seems so dark and seductive. I love the repitition of the "idare you:" Amazing; captivating. I must read more.

All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 9/14/2006
So full of emotion, I love it. Great for reviewing my stuff D~Rowan~ chapter 1 . 9/13/2006
i have very little clue as to what it's about, but the good side to that is that i don't care! haha. good work. especially like the "idare you" lines. good work. and thanks for the reviews.

- devil in a midnight mass
luv me like no other chapter 1 . 7/19/2006
Amazing piece you have here. A bit disjointed for me, but maybe I'm just missing sumthing. I loved reading this and I especially loved the last line.
364 unbirthdays chapter 1 . 6/12/2006
I love this. I really do. Its somewhat 'mysterioius' in an good way, though. I really like how it is so bold and outstanding. I enjoyed this a lot!
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
interesting imagery. for some odd reason, i feel like i'm missing something out of this - like references or something. nice work.
Wicked Witch Krandomity chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
Dark and hectic. Slightly confusing, but I quite liked it. I especially liked how you used "I dare you:..." to help create the mood. Lovely job.

Happy Writing-W.
angel953 chapter 1 . 6/10/2006
interesting though it was a different writing style that i have never seen but it's really the way thanks for the review for my poem Springtime and no unortunately i did not win they said it was to long which made it boring oh well win some lose some
goddessofmoondreams chapter 1 . 6/8/2006
Interesting. You have a very unique writing style. I really liked this poem, very powerful. Keep writing.
who-im-bleeding-for chapter 1 . 6/7/2006
this is freaking awesome. t has a lot of emotion in so little words. I love it. And when I'm talking about wether his hair was brown or black, he said his hair was black and i said it was brown. we had a small but fun debate about it.
skylines chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
You made me sign in! :O Wow, very forceful poem. I love it. I like it so much that I'm going to add it to my favourites. I especially like the last few lines. About the coffin having to fit somebody. It really makes you want to think. Thanks so much for your review, I didn't really notice all the little errors, and people like you pointing them out helps out quite a bit. Thanks again!
burning in effigy chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
Wow... angry poem; like how you have the "I dare you:..." lines, brings everything together and kind of like a morbid playfulness (if that makes any sense)

Last line was my favorite; made me smile, and I went back to the beginning to read it all over again.

Excellent job!
A Midsummer Nights Sacrifice chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
Wow, just wow amazing lots of emotion so unique. I've never read anything like this, this is awesome...

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