Reviews for War Poems
Black Star4 chapter 4 . 4/5/2006
Interesting imagery here. Your poems keep getting shorter. Is there a reason? Maybe, a hope for an end in the war you're speaking of. But, I haven't seen a time without a war on some poor creature, so I can't really comfort you. only give you the 5 of 5 *'s this poem deserves.
Black Star4 chapter 3 . 4/5/2006
This brings to mind the mindset of a victim. Shock. There's a deep feeling of shock and sorrow here. Another 5 of 5 *'s
Black Star4 chapter 2 . 4/5/2006
Truly a lovely poem. I like the mention of fairy tales. It brings to light the fact that, to some people, war doesn't seem real. It's too far from them. Another 5 of 5 *'s.
Black Star4 chapter 1 . 4/5/2006
The world should listen to poets like you. There'd be a lot less damnation for the different and a lot more hope to share. 5 of 5 *'s this poem. Can't believe no one else's reviewed yet...