Reviews for That Tune
Spector'sGirl chapter 1 . 4/10/2006
seems like you may be a musician...?

I loved the opening "i'm getting drunk tonight" - its an awesome way to describe all those overwhelming feelings
Written chapter 1 . 3/29/2006
"And I want it to be so loud, I'll never hear the sound"

that line was awesome. nice job!
Sir Scott chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
Good job. That's getting the music to not be able to hear the for your reviews. Keep writting. I can't wait to read some more of your poems.

SirScott
DarkAdonis255 chapter 1 . 3/24/2006
This is a pretty good poem. It read smoothly with its splendid verse as it described a unique topic. It captures well how music can affect one's mood. It also uses fine imagery near the end with onomatopoeias regarding music. One line of the poem read strangely, however: "And I want it to be so loud, I'll never hear the sound" Hear the sound of what? The music? But it's loud... Also, you use the word "melody" two lines in a row, which puts some unnecessary repetition into the poem. Fine job otherwise, though.