|Reviews for Collision|
| Twilit Exaggerance chapter 1 . 4/8/2006
Like the brackets idea, and the enjambment.
Such contrast, unreal concepts and reality...
It makes me quite sad, actually. :(
| elvenstorm chapter 1 . 4/3/2006
Beautifully abstract and free style. Love the whole feel of it and your choice of words. Well done.
| Rosanna28 chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
Wow, it's been a long time since you posted here! _ This is really beautiful, I love the second stanza, especially the last three lines. Very cool poem!
Much love, Rosanna.
| Emmytastic gal chapter 1 . 3/29/2006
heyy... thanks 4 the review :) awesome poem. your words really create a beautiful masterpiece in our minds. Perfect metaphor... perfect poem...
great job :)Em
| Needa S chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
Vivid piece. Nicely done.
| Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 3/26/2006
I love this. So visual and emotional. It makes me smile as well.
Kepe it up.
| Dancinggal5389 chapter 1 . 3/26/2006
amazing imagery with the shattered heart
| Lovetress chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
This was sweet. Very nice metaphor. Aww I wish I had someone like that. (
| queenvixta chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
This is so beautiful! The imagery is really great and I love the ending. Great work! Thank you for the reviews you've left me! V x
| hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
hum...this ones kinda weird. i like the crashing into the heart thing...but the ending idk maybe its just me but it didnt seem to fit good start tho
| KonekOniko chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
gorgeous imagery...i love it.
| AlboChick chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
my only words to this is oh my god its amazing. lve it.
| free-to-dream15 chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
Very nice write
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
¿Big gun or fast car,—which is more deadly?
I'd say a car on any given day,
Momentum builds up and can only swerve,
Once at speed its direction has taken,
Like a massive river surging to sea,
That once rivulet could not move boulders,
Now rolls mountains down to alluvium;
So two hearts form lightning from sky to earth,
That with intensity sears all in path,
An energy consuming and consumed,
A eucharist of life that fate deems needs,
For its release and crash like meteor,—
Is in God's universe of form divine,
Black chaos that burning stars inhabit,
Before they Nova and burst in fireworks,
To dandelion seed new worlds and moons,
Like love that struck its mortal collision.
p.s. It's great you're posting!
p.p.s. myno is myno. i miss her writing, but that's another story.
p.p.p.s. email me and i'll explain the other question you asked.
| myno chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
Howie Day Collide is a beautiful song... I've got two different recordings of it and listen to them regularly. :) This poem has an interesting rhythm to it, and I like the images.