I really don't know how you do it. You bring the best out in words. Doing what we all try to do, and making us all look sub par.

i just realised i hadnt reviewed this and its one of my favourite poems ever! anywho... yes, well, i love it, speshly the personification (get me wiht the long words P) "pencil-scribbled trees, lamenting the loss of leaves, (lonely now the birds have gone)" woh! x

(the whole world is dead today). great line my darling. i love.

Again, an excellent poem, you should be proud of this one.

"The branches written on the sky

Of pencil-scribbled trees"

Love those opening lines - they set the tone for the whole poem.

Amazing imagery, and wonderfully written. Just a great poem.

(I’ve been drowning here for hours)i love that line. and the whole poem... see you soon darling. iz x

Wow. This is... well, it's a great poem. I'm not much of a poet, but you do a great job with making the mental picture sharp and clear. Very well written.

Wow. I really like this. I love your word choices and forced rhymes; they lend a lazy, drifting, melancholy mood to the whole piece.

Very mournful. I enjoyed reading this very much, well done.

I love the word play and imagery in this. It's lethargic and lazy, but very pretty. Great job.