Reviews for The Roommate x closedfinishedediting X
liquid-dreams-139 chapter 4 . 3/28/2006
aw its so sweet! seriously u better update quick! and ur choice of making it a romance erotica story was great! update sonn!
Hate In The Form Of Passion chapter 3 . 3/26/2006
No doors! M! Naughty! Update soon I luff this story! ~
Hate In The Form Of Passion chapter 2 . 3/26/2006
Hate In The Form Of Passion chapter 1 . 3/26/2006
WOAH! BALL PLAY! M! Hot! Aww. He wanted a serious relationship. How un-top of him and very uh..uke-ish.
slinkytool34629 chapter 3 . 3/26/2006
hot hot hot hot hot! Everything about this story is just hot. I mean, there's really no way to describe it! I love the shower scenes too. Please continue!
Jayn chapter 3 . 3/26/2006
Good story. Please update!
liquid-dreams-139 chapter 2 . 3/26/2006
hey i like it dude please update! its interesting i wanna know more!
lilmissempty chapter 2 . 3/26/2006
This is off to a great start. I can't wait to see what happens with them.
Limited Edition chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
Eh! The ending was really really vocab is good. Some mistakes here and there, nothing major. Awesome descriptions. I vote for posting the next chap!
Ben Wuest chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
Message: Ok, so I'm not going to lie. That was really, really hott. One of those 'hottest things ever'. You're really good at this, I hope for an update soon, lol.


Rating: 3/5Comments: It was hott, yes, but there were several grammatical errors, which is a big deal to me. I will continue to read on this if you keep updating, but you should really look over your work before posting next time, ok?
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