|Reviews for goodbye|
| roachpiece chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
i liked it but there were tons of spellind errors and some parts didn't make any sense.~hail
| she's not breathing chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
i think ... a little too formatted? a subj like death ... needs to be raw, doesn't it? i do love the line about crying. that was really good. or maybe you just overreached. death is this huge subject & you try to tackle like every bit of it. *grins*...