|Reviews for under skin|
| TryNotTo chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
I adore every syllable of this poem. Fantastic work.
| Whoregasmic chapter 1 . 6/24/2006
i love this.i love how at the end you never say what the secret is...everything just stops...great write
| Jezsh chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
I adore the line 'hold your breath whe e'. Zowee! This is gorgeous, I love the extra spaces - the atmosphere of it is electric.
| oops heartbreak chapter 1 . 5/17/2006
Hey, I'm just reviewing to apoligize for assuming you had an eating disorder. Thanks for explaining it to me, but I guess the reason I really saw it was, well, because when you have an ED, you look for a sense of solidarity everywhere, you know? It's weird, I guess, it's just something I tend to do...
Anyway, this poem was really amazing. They're always so well worded, and formatted, and the flow is always amazing. You've got an amazing talent.
| dollface and her cancer chapter 1 . 4/24/2006
...and the static silence at the end is palpable.
| theory of black chapter 1 . 4/5/2006
| account not in use chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
I do this to much, your brilliant idea of a poem, insert your own secret, and you let us, right after that -is- but i only ever get that far, the words freeze when the panic starts.
| lackluster chapter 1 . 3/31/2006
i adore the idea behind this. brilliant.
| White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
Wow. This is incredible.
I loved every line.
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 3/26/2006
I love how lyrical this one - like as I read it, it came so fast like a song. I love the whole divide between words written across you (like looking at a look on someone's face) and the secrets that go with it if only that part of the sentence were legible. Keep up the good work.
| dress her up in fairytales chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
ah, very nice. it sent chills down my spine & i love the format of this. it's beautiful work.
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
nice to see you updated. and i love the mystery at the end. so pretty and flowed together so well.
| she's not breathing chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
ohmyGod. your writing is your pen name. that's all i can say. i'm speechless. wow.
| xoxoMizzatxoxo chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
Very good. Suspenseful.
| chaos called creation chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
i feel like i'm walking around in a daze while reading this. perfect ending, and snags of reality in between.