Reviews for Slice
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
God’s map is has no routes.. no is

I like this... that first line is really powerful and beautifully written... love it
she's not breathing chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
i like being simple. it's about words being a knife, having the power to stab & kill (subtly). absolutely amazing, how layered & deep it is. love.

SliversofSilverPain chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
Very strange... I don't understand how it connects to the heading, but the poem itself works very well. It is well written with good imagery.