i love this format, too - it's different, and i really like it. a different and effective way of presenting the same beauty. i just liked all of this, really, iloveit, but i also really liked the ending. i'm sorry that i can't give constructive criticism, really, because there's nothing to criticize! perfect and brings me to tears again, for some reason even i don't know. your poetry is so refreshing, i'm actually in a really good mood after reading it. wow, just ... amazing, what else can i say? can't wait until you update this!

oh wow, short but still so beautiful. and it's sweet, it made me smile. how can you have so much meaning in all of these? your writing always makes me want to cry, and for some reason this one made me, too.

you, updating often? sounds like heaven and my sanity. i smiled when i read that part. can't wait to read more.

this made me want to cry, it really did. the format was just so clever and powerful and added a lot to the poem, which was amazing and wonderful in itself. 'believe,' 'live,' so much meaning behind all of this. every line just has so much ... meh, i probably don't make any sense. and the ending just made me smile, a touch of light that was written so beautifully and added so much.

amazingamazing. neverstopwriting. i can't wait to see when you next update!

Wow again. Powerful, again.

And the pen name is a quote from a book. In loving memory of a certain character's untimely death.

It tastes like insomnia.

Which is a strange thing to say but it seems to get the point across.

(And I use the word 'powerful' too much. I mean it every time.)

Even better than the first!

I love the one line about the time and what you were doing. It makes it even more real than it is. Perfect format. I love your poetry!

Wonderful motion and format. You've really captured a gentleness in this. Good work.