Your note is very sad, and this poem is sad, too. What happened? Did he or she die? I am sorry, I think you are hurting because this poem is very sad and it makes me sad when I read it but it is sort of like the black & white sunset, I think I will remember the rain in heaven, and it makes me wonder if it does rain in heaven because I think that is very sad.

This poem feels sad to me, it does not have sad words but there is something about it that seems sad. I don't really understand, why do you have to save him or her? You are not doing it the right way, is that the point? I like the line about the tapestry!

You put a " on a line and nothing else, are you allowed to that? You have another haiku, too, it's pretty! I think you like stars alot? I like them, too.

haiku AGAIN? I think maybe too many haikus? They are really beautiful, though! Why are you living in hell? I do not understand this poem :(

You spelled confusion wrong, I think? I think your ote is pretty, it made me think. This is another haiku! You really like haikus, huh? Screaming stars is violent, but this poem is still nice!

This poem doesn't seem as good as the other ones, but I still like it! It is talking about a singer having only one song that people know and then being forgotten, and I like how you don't care about that because the song is still special to you! :)

More haiku, I love haiku _. This is very nice and romantic, and I like all the water images!

I don't understand this poem at all? I don't know anything about Europe so I am confused. I also do not like your ending, I don't think death is more beautiful than life, that is a sad thing to think. Do you really think that? It does get me thinking.

I don't know what "iridescent" means but it is still a very pretty word, it sounds nice. I think this is my favorite poem so far, because it is longer than the other ones, and because I can feel it more? Sorry I am not that good at saying these things. I really like everything, the beginning, the end, the middle, I especially like how you continue lines on the next line, most poetry I've read doesn't do that. I like how you talk about the stars being reborn, I think that is beautiful.

It is cool how the order reverses, your note also talks about order, I think that's neat. This kind of confused me, but I still liked it. And there is another haiku! _

Oh this is a haiku, I know what haiku is. This is really pretty! I like "black&whitesunsets", it's pretty. The note is pretty too.

Hello, I like this alot, it sounds cool how you have 24 poems. Is it because there are 24 hours in a day? I am assuming so, because your author note says one a.m., but I don't think that's a real author note, I think it should be part of the poem. I am very eager to read this, because what you said at the beginning captures my attnetion, this i a journey and there's redemption and an elegy. What's an elegy? This is a pretty poem! I like how it spells believe.

Wow, this is amazing.

The imagery, the emotions, the metaphors, even the clever little formatting.

I don't know really what to say, except. Wow.

Thanks for sharing this. (:

it might have been jumbled but i should have cried for you sort of links it

last stanza is especially haunting

what's she missing?

great imagery here.