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Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 3/26/2006
Sad and (I think) hoping, maybe for an answer?You write wonderfully and the formate is good, I've read other poems with the same format and they are good.

Keep it up.
she's not breathing chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
beautiful format. summary, too. i don't think it's about working or not. it's about the process. & experimenting until you find what works - & plus you end up with a whole chronological file after! it's neat. haha. i love it, actually. it's alright in writing, but what's great is i can TASTE the change. keep going! i be cheering you on, 'cause i'm on all night long.