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Annaece's Forsaken Corpse chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
love the piece. just wondering have you been watching 'life on the murder scene' all week like i have?
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 3/26/2006

Over Black pavement,—

7 buzzards smoothly soar,—

Round & Round,—Death's mark.


Without atmosphere,

Sun's rays irradiate death,—

Fauting no-one's love.


I know life's end is final,

Like Love's sweet kiss given on parting;

Pink dream of Cinnamon's sin.
she's not breathing chapter 1 . 3/26/2006
love it. awesome work! *is really excited proud*

spitex chapter 1 . 3/26/2006
Oh, do I understand/utterly emphasize with this. :/ Great work, in any case; this is really gritty and honest.

Thanks for the nice comments, by the way!
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 3/26/2006
so intense and relatable. and you’ll just be the death of me with yourname carved into the bullet (and into my skin). - my favourite line for sure. nice work.