|Reviews for you want this|
| Annaece's Forsaken Corpse chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
love the piece. just wondering have you been watching 'life on the murder scene' all week like i have?
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 3/26/2006
Over Black pavement,—
7 buzzards smoothly soar,—
Round & Round,—Death's mark.
Sun's rays irradiate death,—
Fauting no-one's love.
I know life's end is final,
Like Love's sweet kiss given on parting;
Pink dream of Cinnamon's sin.
| she's not breathing chapter 1 . 3/26/2006
love it. awesome work! *is really excited proud*
| spitex chapter 1 . 3/26/2006
Oh, do I understand/utterly emphasize with this. :/ Great work, in any case; this is really gritty and honest.
Thanks for the nice comments, by the way!
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 3/26/2006
so intense and relatable. and you’ll just be the death of me with yourname carved into the bullet (and into my skin). - my favourite line for sure. nice work.