|Reviews for CC Nebraska|
| JLei chapter 1 . 4/8/2007
| incognegro chapter 1 . 8/15/2006
I like the enjambent of this piece! :) I've never seen a structure like that before, but I really like it. I also like the repetition.
| B. M. Sandy chapter 1 . 5/18/2006
beautiful. i'm inspired. you are so good with words. ]
| Jecai chapter 1 . 5/6/2006
I love the diverse references and the allusion at the end. People don't always work, but they keep running.
| dfgsfdghftgt44 chapter 1 . 4/6/2006
Whoa! This is so weird and the way you broke the lines up (*and the general way it is written*). I love it cause it's just so weird, but at the same time, it makes almost perfect sense. I love this! Amazing job!
P.S. Thank you for the review of "Aubade of Taurus."
| Chemically Induced chapter 1 . 4/5/2006
nice creation of rushing emotions. i dont understand what is going on, exactly, but maybe it's irrelevant. it seems the feeling is what is important, and with that it dosn't lack. Watchtower Dark Eyes is a great line. great work. i like i like it. :)
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
| braindead1345 chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
i kinda get it, your saying that you love her so much its like you dont know which way is up. theres raw energy in this
| Acting-Girly chapter 1 . 3/28/2006
I liked the poem, though I found it a tad confusing. "Watchtower Dark Eyes" had to be my favorite line. One comment I'd make would be to sperate the sentences a little more so it's easier to read. I want to thnak you for reviewing my poem, it was about me so I'm not quite sure what the cliches were. Thanks all the same, and lovely poem.
| Draketeeth chapter 1 . 3/28/2006
That was cool. strong emotion and nice imagery.
| hey maria chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
"please, this deep/girl I can't barely stand...girl I love I love I love her..." Is this about wanting so much to love someone you don't?
I have a feeling I have no idea what I'm talking about. In any case, the repetition works well and the phrase "Watchtower Dark Eyes" is brilliant.
| Hax Rook chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
fair s of c.. clear enough to wonder, opaque enough to wander. fond of the simple repetitions. almost too fragmented sometimes. pleasantly different - keep building.
| behind the velvet curtain chapter 1 . 3/26/2006
I like the repetition and the breakup of the lines. It has a sort of rushed effect. Very nice.
And thank you for your review.
| chaos called creation chapter 1 . 3/26/2006
The repetition and the choice of words creates such a longing in this. great job
| Manda Pantxike Sterling chapter 1 . 3/26/2006
nice poem. I've never read one like it. very unique writing style