Reviews for up
waitandhope chapter 1 . 3/26/2006
Interesting format. I like it.

And the last line... so true.
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 3/26/2006
Wonderful rush and flow to this. It increases the readers connection to the words and situations. Good work.
eighteen hundred chapter 1 . 3/26/2006
This is cool. Italics &c. is a bit excessive, but other than that, neat.