This chapter was incredibly sad. Just bittersweet I guess.

I was glad she didn't say she loved him back. I think that would have deffinetely taken something away from her character.

I sense that her mother is *really* not going to be happy with Evelyn's relationship with a boy she met in rehab, of all places. lol.

I am really loving this. Can't wait for another update.

Sarah

This is really friggen good. I can't wait for more.

Yeah, I started reading this a few days ago but I didn't comment because, like you said in your email, I wanted to be "caught up". I'm really glad you are benefiting from my review! I just give the kind of reviews that I like to receive. Thoughtful ones. Not "upd8 soon or I kill you in your sleep! teehee".

*sigh*

Ah I can't believe he said he loves her. That's so sweet. I really liked this chapter. In fact, it was my favorite one. The other ones were pretty fast, but this one slowed down and I got some more insight into the other characters (especially Cadance). I love that name by the way. This chapter went at a really, really good pace, and I hope you keep this pace throughout the rest of the story because it is very slow and comfortable and sweet. If that makes sense. lol.

Yeah I can deffinetely tell that the relationship with her mom is going to be a huge deal. I mean, it already is. I sense a confrontation between the two of them, and I honestly hope Evelyn can get out those feelings she has about her (and stop blaming herself).

Okay, this is getting super long and I am gonna be late for class so I'd better go. :) Can't wait for another update.

-Sarah

Hey! Your story was recommended to me (more than once). hehe. So I decided to read it. And I am really glad I did. This is great!

Josh and Evelyn are really sweet. I love their flirting and nervousness. I also love the shared darkness of their pasts (the drug addictions and the mother issues). I like how their mothers are such important characters in their lives, but so completely opposite of each other. It's like the same pain coming from two very different sources.

I only have one criticism. It seemed like they got addicted really, really fast. I assume you were trying to speed up that part of the story to get to the real meat of the plot (trust me, I am guilty of this too). But I think if you slowed it down it would seem more real.

But other than that, things are going along at a good pace. The plot has me hooked. This is going on my faves list and my author alert list. lol. I hardly ever read anything on FP, so I get really excited when I find a good story! Update soon (even though you are updating at a turbo-speed rate right now! _)

-Sarah

I am so ecstatic that you brought my ALL TIME FAVORITE story back to Fictionpress! I read this story when you first posted it on the website, and I must say, after reading the first chapter, I am thoroughly impressed. It's so difficult to find stories nowadays that have, to some degree, such a profound impact on readers (especially those like me who crave for new ways to procrastinate). I cannot wait to see the "new" story and see where it all goes.

o... love at first sight, hmm?

I read this last night and I am hooked. I'm glad you've got more on your website, which means I don't have to wait for you to update here :D

uh-oh. Josh's into drugs to escape from his mother, and Evelyn is trying to escape from her life? And now they're both in the hospital. I'm guessing that they'll meet soon.

OMG! You are back and so is the story! I am so glad that i'll be read it and cry all over once again, lol.. welcome back :D

I was awaiting the day when this would finally be up again. Turns out, today was my lucky day.

Hope you churn out Covet and World Apart too! ((: