|Reviews for define 'collapse'|
| in theory chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
I especially like the line devoted to itself.."crept"..visually spectacular.
| The Red Queen04 chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
I really like your language. Its really quite good. I would suggest that you would put it some articles. For instance,"like a sad little fire in the fireplace."
| MidnightStar005 chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
I had this image painted in my head. Great Job!
| eden is burning chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
Nicelt written, also original which is always good to see. Lovely and ceative uses of imagery. Good poem!