|Reviews for Home At Last|
| Nemonus chapter 1 . 12/19/2006
Nice. Heaven in Windows Media Player, lol! That's inspired. I like some lines of this one a lot; "I do not know what is happening, but I have an idea." (for its implications, calmly), "The walls are color.". Pretty good rhythm etc. and only some of the description is cliche. Good.
| Needa S chapter 1 . 3/31/2006
Beautiful, excellent write. God Bless you and keep on writing.
| Adonia Chesser chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
A darn good poem.