Reviews for Rain
dancingintherain chapter 1 . 8/15/2006
its dark and angsty and the italics give it an edge..i like it!
The Fourth Fate chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
Oo imagery is incredible here. Bravo bravo. I love it. The ending is powerful and strong and will stick with me for a while. Bravo.
SeaVoi chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
That is a really cool poem, very decriptive.
MallowsWins chapter 1 . 4/1/2006
Nothing better than reading a water based poem on a rainy day. I love your poetry, it's so soft and graceful (for lack of better words). I see clear images when I read your words.

Peace, Daze

I've added you to my Favorites List, because I think your words will bring beauty into my life. Also because I have been in a long distance relationship, so I feel like I understand your words a little better.
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 3/31/2006
Very vivid and well thought out. Good work.
Reed The Writer chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
great, this reminds me of a lot of poems i have written in the past.. i love the subject about rain for some reason, and then when i saw it on your list i had to read it first. great, keep up the imagery and italic-ness (its a great add on).

Vyvyan chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
Very nice. Good use of the italics.