| Reviews for Daydream |
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   classic violet chapter 1 . 7/11/2006 gorgeous. |
| Pheobe Meryll chapter 1 . 5/1/2006 very abstract...I'm used to seeing haikus as more descriptive in the visual sense...but undeniably beautiful. |
| Eirien chapter 1 . 4/3/2006 Lovely, there is an elusiveness and restlessness in these words that fits a daydream really well. |
| Absynthe Greene chapter 1 . 4/2/2006 Sounds like the textbook definition of my mind. Very nice. |
| Unready chapter 1 . 3/31/2006 reminds me of the migrane I had in biolody. urgh. tunnelvision. nice haiku. |
| Aquafied chapter 1 . 3/27/2006 makes me feel like i am dunking underwater as fast as possible dizzy and half asleep lovlies. |
| MidnightStar005 chapter 1 . 3/27/2006 This was beautiful! ~xoxo~ |
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 3/27/2006 This is so open-ended and mysterious. I like that it could have so many interpretations. Well done. |
| Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 3/27/2006 very yummy mind candy |
| Johana chapter 1 . 3/27/2006 that's why I love daydreaming so much... nice poem too, hehehe |
| Draketeeth chapter 1 . 3/27/2006 pretty! Some vivid imagery in only a few lines. Completely captured the essence of a wandering thought. |
| chaos called creation chapter 1 . 3/27/2006 i have a clear image if a young girl with her hand propped up, staring out towards the window. good poem |