Reviews for Daydream
classic violet chapter 1 . 7/11/2006
Pheobe Meryll chapter 1 . 5/1/2006
very abstract...I'm used to seeing haikus as more descriptive in the visual sense...but undeniably beautiful.
Eirien chapter 1 . 4/3/2006
Lovely, there is an elusiveness and restlessness in these words that fits a daydream really well.
Absynthe Greene chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
Sounds like the textbook definition of my mind. Very nice.
Unready chapter 1 . 3/31/2006
reminds me of the migrane I had in biolody. urgh. tunnelvision. nice haiku.
Aquafied chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
makes me feel like i am dunking underwater as fast as possible

dizzy and half asleep lovlies.
MidnightStar005 chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
This was beautiful!

Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
This is so open-ended and mysterious. I like that it could have so many interpretations. Well done.
Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
very yummy mind candy
Johana chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
that's why I love daydreaming so much... nice poem too, hehehe
Draketeeth chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
pretty! Some vivid imagery in only a few lines. Completely captured the essence of a wandering thought.
chaos called creation chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
i have a clear image if a young girl with her hand propped up, staring out towards the window. good poem