Reviews for Cry
tornangelwings chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
this is really good i love the emotion, i have sort of poem when i went through depression its called i promised or something like that
howfreakingflash chapter 1 . 12/13/2006
Who are you trying to fool? You're a great poet! Or lyric writer. Because that's how I look at it, lyrics for a song. It's very emotional, especially the goodbye part.
Isabella22 chapter 1 . 3/31/2006
this is really good. no, really

The rhyming seemed forced though. except for the 4th verse.

It's really good. Just try to flow with it though.

Great work! -Isabella22
Awaiting-Life's-Beginning chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
interesting, the beginning was good but then you lost the rythm(sp?) of the rhymes. even so, it's interesting