| Reviews for Cry |
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   tornangelwings chapter 1 . 1/24/2007 this is really good i love the emotion, i have sort of poem when i went through depression its called i promised or something like that |
| howfreakingflash chapter 1 . 12/13/2006 Who are you trying to fool? You're a great poet! Or lyric writer. Because that's how I look at it, lyrics for a song. It's very emotional, especially the goodbye part. |
| Isabella22 chapter 1 . 3/31/2006 this is really good. no, really The rhyming seemed forced though. except for the 4th verse. It's really good. Just try to flow with it though. Great work! -Isabella22 |
| Awaiting-Life's-Beginning chapter 1 . 3/27/2006 interesting, the beginning was good but then you lost the rythm(sp?) of the rhymes. even so, it's interesting |