| Reviews for Grim Reminders |
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  Guest chapter 3 . 11/16/2013 Ohhhh Noooo, quite bad German! Did you have it translated by Google? Your German really sucks. I couldn't understand it without the English translation and I AM A GERMAN! |
 HeatherLee chapter 11 . 2/8/2008 alright one quick comment: for Petrius to think that someone in his family had an emotional connection to Rome is extremely unrealistic. to make that better you could have said that Petrius himself felt a strange connection to Rome, but the way you have it doesnt make sense at all because people never have those kind of feelings. |
| HeatherLee chapter 4 . 2/8/2008 wait, i didnt think she knew Rome's name... |
| HeatherLee chapter 3 . 2/8/2008 okay, in the middle of reading but i have a question on what ive read so far...why does Tasha take all of this abuse? first that crazy broad cutting her hair off and now being slammed into the stairs and bleeding and shes all "eh, lets go take a shower and get the blood off..." wtf? but good story so far! |
| Asce21 chapter 16 . 12/23/2006 I just read your story and I must say it impresses me. You are good at what you do. |
| luxsandie chapter 16 . 8/23/2006 Um... do you still read the reviews? Even after the story is over. I liked this story, it was a nice mix of a the supernatural, violence, and smooth talking. Tehe. I hope you allow constructive critism, but I found the story quite confusing. It seemed that you were missing bits of needed information and details so I didn't grab this story as much as I had hoped to. With what information I did get and puzzled together, this was a nice story. Unless there was a lot of figuring things out by hidden hints and clues to find out the plot, I'm really slow so disregard the above. Looking forward to other stories. |
| Adaku chapter 16 . 8/2/2006 It's over already all ready. Why! Going a little over dramtic so ingore me. I can't wait until you update more stories. -_- From your fan _ Keep up the great work. Till next time waterhealer |
| Adaku chapter 15 . 7/27/2006 The End? Is it completed, or that's the end of the chapter. Anyway nice work. Till next time |
| pianomasterette chapter 15 . 7/19/2006 Wow, that was really good! I'm really really hoping that you're going to write a sequel! PLEASE write a sequel! Heh, otherwise, congratulations :) It was a really good story and I enjoyed it thoroughly :) |
| Adaku chapter 14 . 6/27/2006 Yeah, reviews make me happy too. as long as they are good or helpful. Anyhoo, it really got interesting in the end with Tasha and Rome, though it's kind of rushed. But all in all good job. Till next time waterhealer |
| pianomasterette chapter 14 . 6/26/2006 Finally an update! NOW FOR ANOTHER! YIPPEE! Good chapter by the way :D I'm REALLY glad that rome didn't die... :D |
| Adaku chapter 13 . 6/12/2006 I'm having writier's block as well. Maybe when you get of your writers block, you could redo this chapter waterhealer |
| pianomasterette chapter 13 . 6/10/2006 NO! ROME CANT DIE! ACK! UPDATE! NOW! EEK! |
| Adaku chapter 12 . 5/31/2006 once again i'm sorry of all the random reviews, but the important thing is that you're getting them...right? Anyway, keep up the great work, but add more details, till next time waterhealer |
| Adaku chapter 11 . 5/31/2006 good chapter, though it could use more details. waterhealer |