Reviews for A Longing
The Intelligent Designer chapter 1 . 10/17/2006
Awfully cynical, don't you think? While all of the so called "sin" is taking place, think of all the wonderful things that happen at the same time. Think of the sacrifices, connections, and acts of compassion or selflessness that people do/make everyday. Be mindful of the good as well as the bad, and maybe you won't be so eager to leave this god-awful place before you've had a real chance to experience it.
all for one chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
I like this poem!
Needa S chapter 1 . 4/13/2006
Remarkable message. I feel the same way. Excellent write! God Bless ya.
Trinity Dragon chapter 1 . 3/29/2006
You said it all with that poem. The spirit of God is in this place.