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Reviews for
If I Could Change the World
YuLian
chapter 1 .
3/28/2006
so sad...
-YuLian
Noetic
chapter 1 .
3/28/2006
Really enjoyed that, very sweet and very, very sad. The only thing I can think of as far as improvements are concerned would be to visually separate the two "halves" a bit better :)