great story. hope you'll update it someday. i love kei n syri...hope they'll have a baby soon _

I have enjoyed this very much. I hope you find time to finish it someday as I would love to read the ending:)

Are you done with this story now? If your not please update, it's really very good and I would love to know how it ends. Thanks

update soooooooooooooooon

The story is good. Though at first I liked zeke, but now I despise him. He may deny being a whore, but he is in my opinion. He doesn't deserve pity really... I may have at one point thought that he should die but I love rei's character. And I would hate to see his innocent heart broken... i'm guessing they'd know zeke's true nature soon because of raine.

Some sentences doesn't make sense sometimes but it can be improved. Please update soon. :)

OK so as not to sound like a total BITCH but update already
I Love this story you just cannot leave it like this.

Please update this story! I love it!

hello, this is a great story and I was really hoping to see it completed. I have not reall all of it yet but im really close. not sure if you going to post anything anytime soon but if you have a mailing list my email is

-sniff- Poor Zeke! His story is so sad.

I'm lovin' this story!

What is going to happen now that Kiyer is coming back with Syri's brother and sister? i must admit Kei makes me mad sometimes. I have a feeling he is written like that on purpose. It works but is still kind of annoying.

The whole 'relationship without love' thing irritated me. obviously they're not in love but that doesn't mean they can't be eventually. Why not follow in their fathers footsteps? not like they would know about that.

-Drake-saline

Now that i paid attention more ...

I am not meaning this to be offensive ...

The plural for more than one elf is elves.

I have even had reviews like this. I have a story on that has a title with a homophone problem. I decided to keep it that way on purpose. If you are interested I can give you my profile name.

-Drake-saline

i wasn't expecting that. So what? Was the alliance or 'peace' based off the relationship that blossomed between Kiyer and Toshiya?

-Drake-saline

Sounds pretty good to me. I do have questions though ...

Why were the two kingdoms at war?

For some reason ...

How old are Kei and Syri? [don't know why this popped into my head]

-Drake-saline

I love this story! Its so believable for a second I thought I was in La'Ria! Awesome job. I love the way you portrayed Syri and Kei as hating each other at first. No good relationship STARTS lovey-dovey.