| Reviews for Rain |
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   Micky chapter 2 . 6/15/2006 Yes yes, the first meeting was, funny, aaw, this is gonna be cute |
| Micky chapter 1 . 6/15/2006 Wow, a very nice chapter, I like the plot and it seems like a good story, so, a good review, the best way to keep writers happy, review, review review :) |
| Esquirella chapter 9 . 6/13/2006 The plot thickens even more! |
| afk chapter 9 . 6/11/2006 ok i got a bit confused but that's also because it's late lol. Um you've got some grammar mistakes, i'm sorry if i'm not the first one to tell you this ;; *hug* |
| afk chapter 8 . 6/2/2006 i think that if you put them at the topna nd at the end it would be fine nice plot coming now! |
| Esquirella chapter 8 . 6/2/2006 A very, extremely eventful day. I really liked how Rei took charge. And now I feel so sad for poor Syri. |
| SayoukaDragon chapter 7 . 5/24/2006 I loved the story PLZ hurry and continue |
| Esquirella chapter 7 . 5/24/2006 Nice twist! |
| afk chapter 7 . 5/24/2006 yesh slavery for a week! woot! haha, lovely chap1 sometime i get confused by the different tenses you use in the narrative...but i kknow it can be difficult..i do it too hahaha |
| Kokoro no Wasuremono chapter 6 . 5/22/2006 I love the way Syri works his movements and your way of writing him makes him and Kei more exciting than of the natural. I wish to hear from you and this story next time. And please update fast. (_) |
| SayoukaDragon chapter 6 . 5/20/2006 I really liked that chapter plz keep up the good work |
| Alleykat chapter 6 . 5/19/2006 Es ala means both little and big brother? (chapt 1 & 6) |
| afk chapter 6 . 5/19/2006 me likes! i stil get sometimes cofused about who's talkig lol, but i've goten used to it oi luv kiyer! XD |
| Esquirella chapter 6 . 5/19/2006 Poor Syri! Hot dream that Kei had though. I wonder how long it will take him to give into the urges. |
| Esquirella chapter 5 . 5/15/2006 Things should really get tense in that room as the wedding nears. |