Reviews for Rain |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i didn't remeber them.. i got confursed! lol, anyway cute chap i love the "he sure makes up for is height" XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL! Hitome doesn't play games to lose, does she? |
![]() ![]() ![]() So funny. OMG Favorite character is ultimately Syri. A few spelling mistakes or word mess ups. You put anger instead of angry and other minor things but over all this story is Hilarious. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting beginning. A bit short, but it's an interesting start. I look forward to what you do next. Oh, and for the word "love" when in context with calling someone a lover or something, "Koi" is the more common usage. Or "Koibito" for lover. Just thought I'd give you another word to play with. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooh side story! if it has yaoi it's welcomed! haha, no but really i you have time it would be interesting |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really enjoying the story so far plz update soon ;-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa! LOL! That was a shocker (the kings, I mean! The princes not liking each other I kind of felt coming, but it was awesome to see Syri stand up to Kei! LOL! Should make for one hell of a wedding night!) MPREG: I write one with jma that people seem to like. It's called "You Belong With Me" and our author name is boyz2men-yaoi-writers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice smexy stuff!1 good anime you watched XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() You stopped THERE? C'mon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i luv rei! he's way fun! this story is neat update! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute start. Some of the grammar errors made it a bit hard to follow here and there, but other than that it's a good start. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hm nice strat, would liek to see more! XD |