|Reviews for Rain|
| ayune01 chapter 3 . 1/10/2010
i guess Syri is a time-bomb.
ha h ah haa
| ayune01 chapter 2 . 1/10/2010
i think the POV making the story a little bit messed up.
well, it just my opinion.
better ignore me.*grins*
| ayune01 chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
a litle bit rough on the flow of the story.
but i love the plot.
Mpreg is my fav plot.
thank u for writing this.
| cocorolla chapter 15 . 12/19/2009
Use there when referring to a place, whether concrete ("over there by the building") or ("it must be difficult to live there"), instead of "Their". Their indicates possession. :)
This chapter was kind of depressing. :/
| cocorolla chapter 10 . 12/19/2009
:/ Hitome and Sakura are a bit annoying...
Aside from them though~ I quite fancy this story. :3
| Blo0d StaiNed Rose chapter 29 . 12/10/2009
i hope you will have an amazing time at your birthday...and that you will get internet usage quickly...we missed this story...
HAPPY BIRTHDAY ))
| LovelessXHeartlessXSoulless chapter 28 . 11/17/2009
can't wait for the next chapter, very good
| jessicas favorite stories chapter 28 . 7/25/2009
at first when i read the review thingy i thought this story wuld be stupid but i officially grew t love it ! hurry up and update puh-leze
| Ryeka chapter 28 . 7/17/2009
Yay updates xP though i still wonder when Syri will be popping one out xD
| xXx.Fallen.Angel.xXx chapter 27 . 6/20/2009
this is getting really really good. I can't wait to see what happens to everyone, especially Liole, Syri and Kei... i recon they're the best charaters so far, but Zeke and the others are prety kool to. Either way I love this and can't wait for the next chapter!
I hope you get it out soon!
| bookaholic13 chapter 13 . 6/16/2009
definetly Kei/Syri but Rei/Zeke/Kyo is good !
| bookaholic13 chapter 2 . 6/12/2009
i just feel in love with this story right NOW!
| blankee chapter 2 . 4/15/2009
good for you that you never give up...! :') it's a very nice story... you should really finish this... it was a wonder though, that you still have a grasp of the plot even though it was so long ago that you have thought of it...
| blankee chapter 3 . 4/13/2009
yep... and you have a lot of potential for that improvement... keep it up -len
| blankee chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
there's just one thing i love how you use the phrase "stuttered rendition"... i don't know why, it's pretty poweful! yah,... got it out... now i can sleep... imagine i had to get up from bed and turn on my laptop for this... much love and hugs - len