Reviews for Rain
blankee chapter 27 . 4/12/2009
loved this... so much... uhm... to be constructive though, i have read errors here and there... you know... some spellings were off and the sentences a bit vague, without the right punctuations,...but that doesn't really stop me from reading from beginning to chap27. this is a very enchanting piece... the essence is there... i think if you work some more on the technies then it would be more than perfect...! your fan from now on and all the way- len
JtheChosen1 chapter 27 . 4/6/2009
Awesome work here! Zeke is sure messed up in the head!
i-see-faeries chapter 26 . 9/27/2008
I like this. It's so cute. :D Kei and Syri are adorable, as are Kyo, Rei, and Zeke. I love them all. Update soon.
Glass Eater chapter 13 . 8/6/2008
My Favorite pairing would have to be Shimaru/Satoshu/Aelih. Although they, of course, wouldn't be doing anything sexual until they where much older, I just think it would be cute to watch a relationship grow between the three. That and I love Twincest! lol
KiyashiChan chapter 25 . 6/26/2008
I love this story! So I read like the whole thing in one day and I noticed that on chapter 17 you didn't have the correct word bank at the bottom.. I was wondering, what is the "Maturity Cycle" that Zeke is going through? I can't wait for you to update again, please do so soon!
Dying in Black chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
Yay! A wedding indeed!
YoruNoAi chapter 25 . 5/5/2008
That was one hell of a story. Wish you'd update. First time reader of your story here, and you got me eating out of your hands. I didnt stop. Your couplings are great especially the whole threesome thing. Though i do wish to see more of the Aelih and twin pairing. :D lol
Rumorunderoath chapter 25 . 5/4/2008
Aww! I have a new love! Viaer is so awesome. *huggles him*
efphrim chapter 24 . 2/5/2008
Write more. Please? Im on my knees beggin' ya! It's really starting to get interesting.
efphrim chapter 12 . 2/4/2008
How come your writing has become so sloppy? Like puncuation, and details.
Rumorunderoath chapter 24 . 1/22/2008
UWA! poor Ael! i feel so bad for him. he must miss Zeke so much!
Ruri Star Sykel chapter 24 . 1/20/2008
Yah an up date! great chapter by the way!
DRAGONFIRE04 chapter 24 . 1/19/2008
PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like to see what happen next.
JtheChosen1 chapter 24 . 1/19/2008
gr8 chapter! glad to see u updated! can't wait for more! *squee!*
RaiL chapter 23 . 1/13/2008
Ahh! I'm so glad you updated! Thank you for taking the effort to write more! I'm a fan of your writing and can't wait to read more. I like the way the story flows! Please do write more soon!
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