Reviews for Rain |
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![]() ![]() ![]() loved this... so much... uhm... to be constructive though, i have read errors here and there... you know... some spellings were off and the sentences a bit vague, without the right punctuations,...but that doesn't really stop me from reading from beginning to chap27. this is a very enchanting piece... the essence is there... i think if you work some more on the technies then it would be more than perfect...! your fan from now on and all the way- len |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome work here! Zeke is sure messed up in the head! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this. It's so cute. :D Kei and Syri are adorable, as are Kyo, Rei, and Zeke. I love them all. Update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() My Favorite pairing would have to be Shimaru/Satoshu/Aelih. Although they, of course, wouldn't be doing anything sexual until they where much older, I just think it would be cute to watch a relationship grow between the three. That and I love Twincest! lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! So I read like the whole thing in one day and I noticed that on chapter 17 you didn't have the correct word bank at the bottom.. I was wondering, what is the "Maturity Cycle" that Zeke is going through? I can't wait for you to update again, please do so soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! A wedding indeed! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was one hell of a story. Wish you'd update. First time reader of your story here, and you got me eating out of your hands. I didnt stop. Your couplings are great especially the whole threesome thing. Though i do wish to see more of the Aelih and twin pairing. :D lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww! I have a new love! Viaer is so awesome. *huggles him* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Write more. Please? Im on my knees beggin' ya! It's really starting to get interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() How come your writing has become so sloppy? Like puncuation, and details. |
![]() ![]() ![]() UWA! poor Ael! i feel so bad for him. he must miss Zeke so much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yah an up date! great chapter by the way! |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like to see what happen next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() gr8 chapter! glad to see u updated! can't wait for more! *squee!* |
![]() ![]() Ahh! I'm so glad you updated! Thank you for taking the effort to write more! I'm a fan of your writing and can't wait to read more. I like the way the story flows! Please do write more soon! |