Reviews for Rain
yayawhynot89 chapter 23 . 12/20/2007
Vinta! i love that word lol :) but yeah awesome chapter i loved it
JtheChosen1 chapter 23 . 12/20/2007
lol i can't wait to see how hormaonal the elves will get when they're pregnant! ahh run away!
Rumorunderoath chapter 22 . 12/4/2007
Hmm, so they cant have a baby without being in love, is that just how it always is? or is it just for those two, and with our lovely threesome, will Zeke get caught? its like he really wants to, but then doesn't want to.
Gravilove19 chapter 21 . 9/21/2007
Wow, I can't wait to read more about the boys .

Hope you update again soon and don't stay to busy
Lerene chapter 21 . 9/20/2007
This is an interesting story. I just all the chapter. It wasn't what I thought it would be, but it's still good. I like Kei and Syri
Feyla chapter 20 . 9/15/2007
It's been a few months since this has been updated, so I hope it's not abandoned. My personal opinion is htat if it's been under a year chances are it's just taking a while for the next chapter to come. Since I've just found this I don't know if long inbetween times are normal. But enough of that talk! I've really enjoyed this fic so far, especially the relationship between Kei and Syri. The threesome relationship you have going is quite interesting though, and add into that whatever Zeke's got going and those three make an interesting combination. Their personalities go well together. Just like Syri and Kei. I'm quite enjoying watching their relationship and just when I think everything is going to go downhill you bring it back up. Their relationship still isn't completely ironed out, but that makes it more real. It's taking a while and they're hiding things from each other, but it's going to work out. I hope. I'll have to wait and see though.

I really do hope you get this updated soon, but I know I've just started back with school lately and so have a lot of other people (if you're in school) and life's been rahter hectic. I will look forward to the next update though and add this to my story alerts so that I'll be sure not to miss it!
RaiL chapter 20 . 8/21/2007
Awesomely done chapter! Very very nice yaoi at the end! Thank you for taking the time to write this!
afk chapter 20 . 7/16/2007
hahaha don't worry, sexy chapter very nice! now begins the real serious drama plot XD lol
X0ImaginaryGirl0X chapter 20 . 6/26/2007
Ruri Star Sykel chapter 20 . 6/25/2007
YaY! that threesome was hot! I loved this chapter!
RaiL chapter 19 . 5/27/2007
Thank you so much for updating! I'm so glad you did! I was honestly afraid you might've given up on this wonderful story. Thanks for taking the effort to write this! I hope I get to read the next chapter as soon as time permits you. :) Take care and have an awesome day.
postcards from italy chapter 19 . 5/23/2007
oh how i love this.. please update this soon
Midnights Scream chapter 19 . 5/18/2007
:) it seems like it's been forever since this was update. It was good though the chapter before about Zeke was interesting too and it'd be interesting to see how Syri could possibly handle pregnancy.*giggle* the idea makes me laugh
Ruri Star Sykel chapter 19 . 5/15/2007
That was cute! it was! i liked this chapter a lot please keep up dating!
RaiL chapter 18 . 5/1/2007
Fantastic story! I like the characterization immensely! I've gradually fallen in love with all of your characters in one way or another. I love the time you've taken to flesh out not only your mains but sides as well. Thank you for all the wonderful effort you have put in thus far. I can't wait to read more and hope you write more in your own time.
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