You've kept me up to the wee hours of the morning with your awesome writing! It's almost 2:00am here and I'm loathe to go to bed and lose time not reading. Very very interesting so far. I most definitely can't wait to read the rest. My honest apologies for not reviewing every chapter. Do take care!

um... interesting...i guess

WOW soo cool i absolutly loved it. At first i was like "ok i think thats a spelling mistake they are both guys!" and then when i read bout they guy getting pregnant i was just whoa wait a sec that can't be right but then i caught on that this a fictional story an if u wanna make it so guys can have kids good for u now at least some guys will know the pain we go thru! lol p

I absolutely loved this chapter. I liked learning more about Zeke's past and character. I hope to see more of his past.

You're doing a wonderful job.

You switched tense like once or twice but it's nothing I havent done in the past week.

I love this story a lot.

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I like how you did Zeke's past...every interesting. *giggle* I love those three they're just so cute!

i love this story and i want to read more so up date please!

yes they finaly sovle there little problem. kie shows Syri that there is still a chance that he will the married life hes always wanted. oH, kie is staarting to get overprotective on Syri from"prince" Liole...Iwonder what will happen next will kie declare war on liole for what he has done to or almost do to Syri when he tells him what happen. write another chapter i really want to now what happens.

Kyo isn't a slut!... He just likes sex. Yes! I heart you for putting them all happy happy in this chapter. Much apperciation and Yes I still think Liole is an asshole, the bitch raped Syri how can you like him. I really like Rei, Kyo, and Zeke. Think they make the story really funny and awesome so don't sompletely forget about them! Update soon!

*whimpers* plz write another story i want to no if kie will love Syri the way he wants him to or will there never be love between them, plz write i want to now what happens to them.

P.S.

Get story i love it

ah. those poor two it's really kinda sad that they think about the other one and they won't bring the subject up so they're both sad, but they really don't need to be.

This was really good!

Syri kinda ruined it though, idiot boy!

They really need to talk more and sort this out. STOP DENYING THINGS!

Kei never asked why Syri was scared of Prince Liole either, though I can obviously see why

Can't wait for the next chappie!

Update really soon

Dark Kaiser

they really need to talk more hahahah but nice chapter, sad too :( but i hope it all gets better in magic island! or beach haha

wow, it took four hours, but I read all 15 chapters in one go. Great story, I like your writing style, but must point out that some parts were confusing; for instance, shifts in locations are not clearly identified. I guess I should insert that my fave couple is Kei and Syri, even though I was annoyed with Syri for destroying the mood in Chapter 15. Why does he have to bring up the obligation thing and killed Kei's passion? Oh well. Still like the story though. Since you were talking about chapter 17 at the end of chap 14, I am assuming you have written the next chapter, so please update soon.

Please-please...update already, I'm having myself really glued to your story and yet still you haven't updated yet! I'm really really anxious to know what will happen in their wedding night -giggles- and what will happen to Zeke and the 2 princes. (_)

That was sweet. though I don't likr how they both think the other doesn't like them. Good story and I hope you update soon!