Reviews for Rain
afk chapter 14 . 9/9/2006
yesh! some sex! woow! and awqw they are so cite togetehr! XD
Dark Kaiser973 chapter 14 . 9/6/2006
YAY! An update! And finally they're wed!This was such a good chapter!I absolutely loved it!It was so cute! I already hate that fairy bitch though.

Can't wait for 15, please update soon!

Dark Kaiser
Dark Kaiser973 chapter 13 . 8/20/2006
This was really good! I love this so far!I loved that the KeiSyri relationship moved up a step. SO SWEET!I also loved the Aelih, Satoshu interaction it was cute! Will they eventually be a pairing or will they stay just friends?Love all of this so far!

Update really soon!

Dark Kaiser
Midnights Scream chapter 13 . 8/12/2006
The little ones kissed and it was so funny because they acted like it wasn't anything special. I can't believe they walked in on the three. I'd be embarrassed and awkward having seem that. I like how Syri and Kei seem to be getting a lot closer. I can't wait for the wedding and. Kyo/Rei/Zeke and Kei/ Syri are my favorites. I'm sorry I just couldn't pick one! Update soon
UMIFIREFLY15 chapter 13 . 8/10/2006
hm...I think my favorite pairings are Kei/Syri and the threesome. I like the love/hate thing between the first two and the three are just cute.
bambi4real chapter 13 . 8/9/2006
My fav pairing in order is the threesome(kyo/zeke/rei), kiyer/toshiya, and then kei/Rei.
Jayn chapter 13 . 8/9/2006
Pairings! How cute, those kids kissed each other. Hmm, i like the main one, Kei/Syri, but Kyo/Rei/Zeke is a close second. PLEASE update!
torri chapter 13 . 8/7/2006
kei/ syri is my favorite but so is kyo/rei/zeke and stop trying to make zeke evil i love zeke
Solarfox chapter 13 . 8/7/2006
Great chapter. Was confused when it said Rain updated in my email. But then I read the chapter and was frickin happy that you updated. update soon
afk chapter 13 . 8/5/2006
umm wel now that you ask..*veil laugh*

i luv Kyo/Rei/Zeke and i oul dluv to see a lemon with those three _~

then Kiyer and toshiya are just way sexy! *_* hahaha and yesh i like teh main pairing, but you know..the otehrs are hawt hahaa
Quietly Losing Control chapter 1 . 7/29/2006
This is a good start but you might want to do a bit of punctuation revision, there are a lot of missing commas.
Midnights Scream chapter 12 . 7/14/2006
oh!Bad Zeke. I hope he lies to that dude and I'm glad those three are together so cute!
afk chapter 12 . 7/13/2006
oh dark secrets! lovely! XD i really want to see a threesome now hahahaa great cvhap
Jayn chapter 12 . 7/11/2006
Cool. _ Please update!
souldriven chapter 11 . 7/1/2006
I'm waiting for Kei and Syri to admit they have feelings for each , as for Kyo, originally I didn't think he was slut-ish at all. Especially with that flashback about himself training until he dropped cause he broke up with someone before his dad told him about the marriage arragenments. Now I think he is a little but that's ok. This story sure is getting a lot darker but that's okay. I think the trio need to learn to share though if they're going to be a threesome (lol). Oh and I'm waiting for Daisuke to go into detail of what he's done with Yuri in bed and for Kyo to go 'LALALA! I'm not listening!' as he clamps his hands over his ears. Maybe you could use a scene like that to lighten the mood of the story as it gets darker?
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