Reviews for Watch In Wonder
shadowrose chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
I can't sign in and review, cuz it's only allowed one per chap. but...i want you to know that that's the most beautiful thing i've ever bloody read. Seriously.
death-caster chapter 1 . 3/28/2006
HAH. I was right. You are sore at me. "She will love you". "She will take you"? Yeah. Hah. So .S. Freakin awesome, though
The Red Queen04 chapter 1 . 3/28/2006
When I read it, the poem is good, but it is a little hard on the eyes. Almost 200 words in lines of two or three is very long. I think it would look and, indeed, sound better, if you were to lengthen your stanzas, according to how the words flow. For instance, instead of "A promised life/Eternal kisses/Reach the sun/And touch the moon" which is choppy, try "A promised life/Eternal kisses reach the sun/And touch the moon."