Reviews for In The Beginning
EWindheim chapter 1 . 9/19/2013
Interesting perspective on the many things that make religion hard. It's sad to look back and see how misguided people have hidden behind their faith as justification for doing awful things to their fellow human beings. At the same time, faith can bring hope when we need it most.

Regardless, great poem!
Ashelin chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
This is a interesting poem, and it does show mans downfall, but i think you are being very contradictary in your note vs. your poem. im sorry, im a self-proclaimed critic.
Zoycitenega chapter 1 . 3/29/2006
Wow. Just, wow. I love this poem, especially the last stanza. Good work.
bihzhu chapter 1 . 3/28/2006
i think your concept is really interesting. and its true, God's not the problem, its Man's interpretation of God that leads to disaster. :)