Reviews for butterflies
relapse into change chapter 1 . 11/5/2007
i love this

love the 'butterflies kind of way, falling kind of way, flying, dying..' it's truly lovely
ten pts above average chapter 1 . 5/22/2006
oh wow.. I loved this.. the falling, flying, dying kind of way... wow.. and the ending was amazing.. what can I say? your brilliant..
axis.on.a.tilt chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
I like it. True, huh?
ThisCut-UpAngel chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
This reminds me so much of my relationship..I only wish I knew how you did that! I applaud you!
Chemically Induced chapter 1 . 4/6/2006
this is wonderful! the words get across the loving hesitation the the almost-lover flawlessly, artfully, and directly. i loved completely the ending. "...before you say the right thing/ and i fall for you." you are inspiring and daunting, simulteneously. keep up the intimidation, the block-breaking. well done!

love .
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 4/6/2006
it's perfect.

~* Noelle
a lonely september chapter 1 . 4/6/2006
'because you're perfect, you know?' i love that. . . this whole thing was just great. loved it.
finger on the trigger chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
masterful. i fell right through it & became ensnared in your writing.

it's too perfect for words. i loved the first stanza & how it rhymed so unconsciously, as if it just flowed out & you couldn't stop it. great rhythm, great inspiration.
Matet chapter 1 . 3/29/2006
aw, that's soo adorable.i really liked the ending! good job.

adding this as my favorite. XD
Dragonzz chapter 1 . 3/29/2006
Wow. I love the second and third stanza. Great job!