| Reviews for butterflies |
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   relapse into change chapter 1 . 11/5/2007 i love this love the 'butterflies kind of way, falling kind of way, flying, dying..' it's truly lovely |
| ten pts above average chapter 1 . 5/22/2006 oh wow.. I loved this.. the falling, flying, dying kind of way... wow.. and the ending was amazing.. what can I say? your brilliant.. |
| axis.on.a.tilt chapter 1 . 5/8/2006 I like it. True, huh? |
| ThisCut-UpAngel chapter 1 . 5/8/2006 This reminds me so much of my relationship..I only wish I knew how you did that! I applaud you! |
| Chemically Induced chapter 1 . 4/6/2006 this is wonderful! the words get across the loving hesitation the the almost-lover flawlessly, artfully, and directly. i loved completely the ending. "...before you say the right thing/ and i fall for you." you are inspiring and daunting, simulteneously. keep up the intimidation, the block-breaking. well done! love . |
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 4/6/2006 it's perfect. ~* Noelle |
| a lonely september chapter 1 . 4/6/2006 'because you're perfect, you know?' i love that. . . this whole thing was just great. loved it. |
| finger on the trigger chapter 1 . 4/2/2006 masterful. i fell right through it & became ensnared in your writing. it's too perfect for words. i loved the first stanza & how it rhymed so unconsciously, as if it just flowed out & you couldn't stop it. great rhythm, great inspiration. |
| Matet chapter 1 . 3/29/2006 aw, that's soo adorable.i really liked the ending! good job. adding this as my favorite. XD |
| Dragonzz chapter 1 . 3/29/2006 Wow. I love the second and third stanza. Great job! ~dragonzz~ |