Cute haiku. I like how you spaced out "wingless" and "soaring," because that made the words feel like they were actually flying. I also like that you used verbs a lot in this - that makes the poem stronger. Keep writing! :)

This has an air of freedom and summertime nostalgia.

squirrels got it all figured out man... foamy is master... oh... waitsorry wrong place...i love this really. cheers-rabbit

Pretty! I like the words and concept. Should there be a period at the end? It would concrete the finish more nicely, even if they're not conventional for haiku, which I do not recall.

This is cool, I love the way it places an image in my mind.

Hooray haiku! Though the spacing in the third like is a little hackneyed (quite hypocritical for me to say, I have done it myself). Aside from that small point, this is good.

Kind of funny, yet very vivid.

This makes me giggle!

~xoxo~

I love squirrels! _

This is a great haiku. You took a wonderful topic and made a poem that poisons me with envy.

(I told you that I liked squirrels.)

reminds me more of falling than flyingbut then i read the title

and was a cute end to the day.

see now THAT is my type of haiku..i hate reading them, hate writing them...and yet this one captures it all perfectly...succinct yet profound...lovve it!

Wow, excellent haiku! It's cute! Write on!

~Anna~