Reviews for Squirrels chapter 1 . 9/27/2006
Cute haiku. I like how you spaced out "wingless" and "soaring," because that made the words feel like they were actually flying. I also like that you used verbs a lot in this - that makes the poem stronger. Keep writing! :)
Annabell Lee chapter 1 . 4/5/2006
This has an air of freedom and summertime nostalgia.
run rabbit run chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
squirrels got it all figured out man... foamy is master... oh... waitsorry wrong place...i love this really. cheers-rabbit
Nemonus chapter 1 . 4/3/2006
Pretty! I like the words and concept. Should there be a period at the end? It would concrete the finish more nicely, even if they're not conventional for haiku, which I do not recall.
Absynthe Greene chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
This is cool, I love the way it places an image in my mind.
Unready chapter 1 . 3/31/2006
Hooray haiku! Though the spacing in the third like is a little hackneyed (quite hypocritical for me to say, I have done it myself). Aside from that small point, this is good.
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
Kind of funny, yet very vivid.
MidnightStar005 chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
This makes me giggle!

magpiemargie chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
I love squirrels! _

This is a great haiku. You took a wonderful topic and made a poem that poisons me with envy.

(I told you that I liked squirrels.)
Aquafied chapter 1 . 3/29/2006
reminds me more of falling than flyingbut then i read the title

and was a cute end to the day.
Goblin Coffee Shop chapter 1 . 3/29/2006
see now THAT is my type of haiku..i hate reading them, hate writing them...and yet this one captures it all perfectly...succinct yet profound...lovve it!
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 3/29/2006
Wow, excellent haiku! It's cute! Write on!